FB. Posted April 18, 2012 Report Share Posted April 18, 2012 Great terrace tune this one. Not sure if anyone uses it in the a-league. When marimba rhythms start to play Dance with me, make me sway Like a lazy ocean hugs the shore Hold me close, sway me more Like a flower bending in the breeze Bend with me, sway with ease When we dance you have a way with me Stay with me, sway with me Other dancers may be on the floor Dear, but my eyes will see only you Only you have the magic technique When we sway I go weak I can hear the sounds of violins Long before it begins Make me thrill as only you know how Sway me smooth, sway me now Other dancers may be on the floor Dear, but my eyes will see only you Only you have the magic technique When we sway I go weak I can hear the sounds of violins Long before it begins Make me thrill as only you know how Sway me smooth, sway me now You know how Sway me smooth, sway me now 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hendo Posted April 18, 2012 Report Share Posted April 18, 2012 (edited) ''When marimba rhythms start to play Dance with me, make me sway Like a lazy ocean hugs the shore Hold me close, sway me more Like a flower bending in the breeze Bend with me, sway with ease When we dance you have a way with me Stay with me, sway with me Other dancers may be on the floor Dear, but my eyes will see only you Only you have the magic technique When we sway I go weak I can hear the sounds of violins Long before it begins Make me thrill as only you know how Sway me smooth, sway me now Other dancers may be on the floor Dear, but my eyes will see only you Only you have the magic technique When we sway I go weak I can hear the sounds of violins Long before it begins Make me thrill as only you know how Sway me smooth, sway me now You know how Sway me smooth, sway me now'' I'm not a homosexual, so where are the lyrics then mate? Edited April 18, 2012 by Hendo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marteaux Posted April 18, 2012 Report Share Posted April 18, 2012 Micha mate, I think this song is about Dean Martin smashing the holy cunt out of some hot bird. Not gay, if you ask me. Like the tune a lot FB, but GL to the chap who adapts it and has the balls to post their work on the forum, as it won't be me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Braveheart Posted April 18, 2012 Report Share Posted April 18, 2012 Tune is quality. I see what Marteaux is saying regarding the lyrics too but I think one of the creative Chaps on here could give it a crack. Just gotta be constructive with the criticism not destructive. btw Hendo, this is pretty much the 1950's version of 50cent's 'CandyShop'. Deano is talking about ploughing a multitude of muff. Renowned heavy drinker and swordsman. Legend. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FB. Posted August 6, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 6, 2012 (edited) Need songs for Croaysha match. First attempt at lyrics; I can hear the sounds of the fans Long before, it begins Make us sing as only you know how Melburnians, our champions Lay Lay Lay Lay Lay Lay Lay Lay Lay Layyy Lay Lay Layyy Lay Lay Layyy Lay Lay Lay Lay Lay Lay Lay Lay Lay Layyy Lay Lay Layyy Lay Lay Layyy xRepeat Few more verses wouldn't hurt tbh. Edited August 6, 2012 by FB. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FB. Posted August 7, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2012 Yay/nay. Something gentleman, anything at all? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MTP Posted August 7, 2012 Report Share Posted August 7, 2012 very nice FB. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KSK_47 Posted August 7, 2012 Report Share Posted August 7, 2012 Yay/nay. Something gentleman, anything at all? Sorry mate. I was on my phone, so all I could give was a "like" In terms of more in depth feedback the only thing I would change is the line "I can hear the sounds of the fans" but I cant think of anything better. In the original song the opening line has 9 syllables which has a better flow (Make us sing as only you know how has 9- flows really well) Other than that small issue, fantastic work as always Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kingawesomeness Posted August 7, 2012 Report Share Posted August 7, 2012 (edited) In terms of more in depth feedback the only thing I would change is the line "I can hear the sounds of the fans" "I can hear the chanting Yarraside, Long before, it begins. Make us sing as only you know how, Melbourne Heart, play to win" Thoughts? Edited August 7, 2012 by kingawesomeness Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KSK_47 Posted August 7, 2012 Report Share Posted August 7, 2012 "I can hear the chanting Yarraside, Long before, it begins. Make us sing as only you know how, Melbourne Heart, play to win" Thoughts? I like your first line, but much prefer FB's last line Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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